Your lyrics?

[androdaking]

Have you done any lyrics that you wanna show? Do it here!!!

There is one rule here thou. You can not steal anyone's lyrics! That is not fair!

I'll start with the lyrics I've done, that I think are my best. Not Nikola class, but still.



When You're Not Here

When I was asleep last night
You were in my dream
It was the seventh time
only of this week

I wanna be with you tonight
I wanna see you and I light
all the candles in this place
'Cause it is so cold without you
And I wanna see your face
But it is so dark

...when you're not here.

I love you
But I know it's hard
'Cause you're over there
And I am stuck here

I wanna be with you tonight
I wanna see you and I light
all the candles in this place
'Cause it is so cold without you
And I wanna see your face
But it is so dark without you

I wanna hear your voice tonight
I wanna see you but you're out of sight
and this room is so dark
and it feels so cold...

...when you're not here.



Not Hardcore Anymore


I have a friend. He was really hardcore
He listened to all the bands and he had all the records
But one day he got a hit to his head, he passed out
When he woke up he said he didn't wanna the sound of hardcore anymore

Now he's, he's not hardcore anymore
He listens to synthpop and disco dance, yeah
Now he's, he's not hardcore anymore
Infected mushroom and techno trance YEAH!

He was as straight edge as he could be
Refused, Minor Threat, yeah all the same bands as me
Alcohol, nicotin and drugs, it was evil to him
Now he takes ecstasy every weekend

Now he's, he's not straight edge anymore
He listens to synthpop and disco dance, yeah
Now he's, he's not straight edge anymore
Infected mushroom and techno trance YEAH!




Thed (which stands for the darkness, but there's a band called like that. Don't want any up messing):

I'm falling down
Towards the ground
I don't know
If I'm ever getting up

I'm trying hard
to survive
Trying hard
Just to get by

You try to be
exactly like them
you try to be
exactly the same way

Why can't you see?
You're different!
Why can't you see?
You're better than them!


And now only some choruses:

1:

Hold on to your dreams
Even how hard it seems
The future is ours
All the minutes all the hours


2:

It was a source of light
when you came into my life
And I knew that I was yours
When I found that source

[karro]

Good topic Idea! I wrote plenty random piece of lyrics. Some have to be put down. I have this wrtting blockus since a couple of time Anyway...I will make a cleaning for sure.

Some sketch here

Sleep to dream

I still woke up at the dawn
Screaming your name out of loud
But no one was there
I thought i've felt you
It was like your breath holding me
Bringing me to the rising daylight
Once rouse I can live the emptiness of my bed
I dreamt my reality cause no one is really here
Its already gone to reach another just like me
Your name is embedded in my heart
True love but not real love


Soulmate

Your ears make me sing
Your voice makes me listen
Your hands make me shiver
Your breath makes me breathe
Your eyes make me feel pretty
In your eyes I see the reflect of my true self


Emotionless

The science told me that when I love you
it's just my hypothalamus that bathes into the lulibeline.


The process of life

You wanna grow up fast and you wanna grow old slow.
You've not chosen who you was born but you can choose what you will become.


Misinterpretation

I'm ugly among beautiful people
I'm beautiful among ugly people
What is beauty if not relative?

[Dany]

Androdaking said:

Have you done any lyrics that you wanna show? Do it here!!!

There is one rule here thou. You can not steal anyone's lyrics! That is not fair!

I'll start with the lyrics I've done, that I think are my best. Not Nikola class, but still.

Ok I trust the MC members not the others.. it would be more prudent to create a restricted area like before to share lyrics... Do you see what I mean ? This area would be a kind of "chilin out place" but the access would be reserved to members...

[karro]

If those can help to find their own inspiraion inside themselve and they use mine that means they liked it and they think it's useful to share so I've done my job in a way. They helped me to sprend the message.

[androdaking]

Yeah. If people are that lazy, they can't make up their own lyrics. And they like mine. They can take parts, but not copy the whole shebang

[Brownsound]

well I know this girl and I'm crazy for her
I fucked up last night and I wasnt sober
I cant remember half the things I did
so I guess I've placed my final bid
we danced a bit it was fine and dandy
but then I lost control and got out of handy
so now my chance has went from slim to none
but for me you will still be the one

I really feel
I'm prepared to kneel
If you could just forgive me for what I've done
I regret it all, It was really dumb
I really feel
I'm prepared to kneel
My body is acheing, I'm feeling numb
I regret it all, It was really dumb

I spent this whole damn day regretting
my actions in that drunken setting
I cant believe I could lose so much
by drinking that last glass of scotch
so I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive
a guy that just with you wants to live
so now my chance has went from slim to none
but for me you will still be the one



First song I ever wrote. Your average skatepunk tune really. Don't write that kind of music anymore though, it felt kind of contrived and I had lots of ideas that just didn't fit the kind of music we played. So it's mostly punkmetal/progressive metal/old school heavy metal these days.

[androdaking]

Really cool lyrics!!

You're from Karlstad? cool. Are you in a band?

[millencoolin2]

hey, I have some, heheh, stupid, but are mine!

KEEP OUT

VERSE I
I'm just a boy but you don't know
In a body of man with a child's soul
For a long time I'm trying to tell you this words
If you don't like my way, get out of my world.

PRE-CHORUS
Pick up your thinks and go away
Now I don't need them.

CHORUS
I lose my time with your false love
This make me sick, but now this don't import
All the words you scream to me
Are dead now I have a new world to see.

VERSE II
Remember the past, days of tears and pain
Your lies has been recorded in my brain
I wonder if you don't want me to your evil game
'Cause this time I'm still thinking the same.

BRIDGE
I can't look in your eyes
'Cause I'm full of your lies.




maybe it has some mistakes, I was in the 2nd period of the english course

my 500th post

[Brownsound]

Androdaking said:

Really cool lyrics!!

You're from Karlstad? cool. Are you in a band?

Yeah, I go to University here. I'm from Lysekil on the west coast really. Nope, not in a band anymore. Played punkrock in my old band and that's the first tune I wrote for that band.

Wanna start a band?

[Bernt]

lysekil is pretty close to where i live Orust

[Brownsound]

Bernt said:

lysekil is pretty close to where i live Orust

Not far at all.

[karro]

It's all good.

[millencoolin2]

I have some compositons too (in mid)

[ftp]http://www.millencoolin2005.web1000.com/keep_out.mid[/ftp]

listen and comment, please!

[karro]

I hear alot of For MOnkeys influences in your song. It's good.

[androdaking]

Brownsound said:

Yeah, I go to University here. I'm from Lysekil on the west coast really. Nope, not in a band anymore. Played punkrock in my old band and that's the first tune I wrote for that band.

Wanna start a band?

Yeah, if I lived in Karlstad/Lysekil! But I live in Fagersta. Too far away.

I was on vacation in Lysekil this summer